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Title: Provincial anthem?
Post by: Barclamïu da Miéletz on March 19, 2024, 03:35:15 AM
What do you guys think? Melody could be Belgium's anthem "La Brabançonne" (https://filetransfer.io/data-package/JQxUbE4v#link)
Title: Re: Provincial anthem?
Post by: Barclamïu da Miéletz on March 19, 2024, 04:10:38 AM
Quote from: Barclamïu da Miéletz on March 19, 2024, 03:35:15 AMWhat do you guys think? Melody could be Belgium's anthem "La Brabançonne" (https://filetransfer.io/data-package/JQxUbE4v#link)
Here are the lyrics:
The song of Cézembre
Oh dear Cézembre, oh holy land of freedom,
For Thee our hand, for Thee our heart!
For Thee our blood, oh dearest homeland,
We swear to you, oh Cézembre!
You went through troubles, our dearest land,
And we have helped Thee through!
Henceforth, your people will keep singing:
The Law, the King and Freedom high! (2x)
The Law, the King and Freedom high,
the Law, the King and Freedom high!

Some parts were translated from the German version of La Brabançonne (Die Brabançonne/Das Lied von Brabant)** and the Dutch (Flemish) version of the anthem (De Brabançonne)*, some I did myself***. What do you guys think? What do you Mr Sénéschal @þerxh Sant-Enogat think?
* = First line is from the Flemish version which goes like this: "O dierbaar België, o heilig land der Vaad'ren". I translated and adapted it to be "Oh dear Cézembre, oh holy land of freedom"
** = Lines 2, 3 (adapted) and 4 (adapted) are from the German version, translated. That includes lines 7 (adapted) and 8 (adapted as well)
*** = The parts I wrote myself are lines 5 and 6
Title: Re: Provincial anthem?
Post by: Barclamïu da Miéletz on March 19, 2024, 04:19:24 AM
Quote from: Barclamïu da Miéletz on March 19, 2024, 04:10:38 AM
Quote from: Barclamïu da Miéletz on March 19, 2024, 03:35:15 AMWhat do you guys think? Melody could be Belgium's anthem "La Brabançonne" (https://filetransfer.io/data-package/JQxUbE4v#link)
Here are the lyrics:
The song of Cézembre

Oh dear Cézembre, oh holy land of freedom,
For Thee our hand, for Thee our heart!
For Thee our blood, oh dearest homeland,
We swear to you, oh Cézembre!
You went through troubles, our dearest land,
And we have helped Thee through!
Henceforth, your people will keep singing:
The Law, the King and Freedom high! (2x)

Some parts were translated from the German version of La Brabançonne (Die Brabançonne/Das Lied von Brabant), some I did myself. What do you guys think? What do you Mr Sénéschal @þerxh Sant-Enogat think?

[...] oh holy land of freedom [...] - This is the full name of Cézembre being referenced (Provinçù Soveran da Cézembre/Sovereign Province of Cézembre)
You went through troubles, our dearest land [...] - This is Cézembre being referenced when France attempted to claim it back and being reclaimed by King Robert I
[...] The Law, the King and Freedom high! [...] - Decided to reference HM King John because Cézembre is a beautiful looking (from photos) province of Talossa and HM King John is the King
Title: Re: Provincial anthem?
Post by: Barclamïu da Miéletz on March 19, 2024, 04:37:31 AM
Quote from: Barclamïu da Miéletz on March 19, 2024, 04:10:38 AM
Quote from: Barclamïu da Miéletz on March 19, 2024, 03:35:15 AMWhat do you guys think? Melody could be Belgium's anthem "La Brabançonne" (https://filetransfer.io/data-package/JQxUbE4v#link)
Here are the lyrics:
The song of Cézembre
Oh dear Cézembre, oh holy land of freedom,
For Thee our hand, for Thee our heart!
For Thee our blood, oh dearest homeland,
We swear to you, oh Cézembre!
You went through troubles, our dearest land,
And we have helped Thee through!
Henceforth, your people will keep singing:
The Law, the King and Freedom high! (2x)

Some parts were translated from the German version of La Brabançonne (Die Brabançonne/Das Lied von Brabant), some I did myself. What do you guys think? What do you Mr Sénéschal @þerxh Sant-Enogat think?
Who's willing to translate the lyrics to Talossan and adapt them accordingly?
Title: Re: Provincial anthem?
Post by: Barclamïu da Miéletz on March 19, 2024, 04:38:42 AM
Quote from: Barclamïu da Miéletz on March 19, 2024, 03:35:15 AMWhat do you guys think? Melody could be Belgium's anthem "La Brabançonne" (https://filetransfer.io/data-package/JQxUbE4v#link)
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Title: Re: Provincial anthem?
Post by: Barclamïu da Miéletz on March 20, 2024, 04:50:46 AM
Quote from: Barclamïu da Miéletz on March 19, 2024, 04:37:31 AM
Quote from: Barclamïu da Miéletz on March 19, 2024, 04:10:38 AM
Quote from: Barclamïu da Miéletz on March 19, 2024, 03:35:15 AMWhat do you guys think? Melody could be Belgium's anthem "La Brabançonne" (https://filetransfer.io/data-package/JQxUbE4v#link)
Here are the lyrics:
The song of Cézembre
Oh dear Cézembre, oh holy land of freedom,
For Thee our hand, for Thee our heart!
For Thee our blood, oh dearest homeland,
We swear to you, oh Cézembre!
You went through troubles, our dearest land,
And we have helped Thee through!
Henceforth, your people will keep singing:
The Law, the King and Freedom high! (2x)

Some parts were translated from the German version of La Brabançonne (Die Brabançonne/Das Lied von Brabant), some I did myself. What do you guys think? What do you Mr Sénéschal @þerxh Sant-Enogat think?
Who's willing to translate the lyrics to Talossan and adapt them accordingly?
Considering French is also spoken on Cézembre, we could have the anthem translated to French as well.
Title: Re: Provincial anthem?
Post by: þerxh Sant-Enogat on March 23, 2024, 10:15:13 AM
Quote from: Barclamïu da Miéletz on March 19, 2024, 03:35:15 AMWhat do you guys think? Melody could be Belgium's anthem "La Brabançonne" (https://filetransfer.io/data-package/JQxUbE4v#link)

Thanks Barclamïu for the proposal ! and the nice lyrics too.
After a few days now, I wonder if it is a good idea to base our Provincial anthem on the national anthem of another country, and Belgium has no real logical link with Talossa or Cézembre. The French anthem would be a bit more logical geographically speaking, but it is the anthem of the country from which Cézembre seceeded on 1982.
Could we imagine another music ? more related to Brittany, such as in this : https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=m9mup3aA08Y
All suggestions welcome !
Title: Re: Provincial anthem?
Post by: Barclamïu da Miéletz on March 23, 2024, 11:16:09 AM
Quote from: þerxh Sant-Enogat on March 23, 2024, 10:15:13 AM
Quote from: Barclamïu da Miéletz on March 19, 2024, 03:35:15 AMWhat do you guys think? Melody could be Belgium's anthem "La Brabançonne" (https://filetransfer.io/data-package/JQxUbE4v#link)

Thanks Barclamïu for the proposal ! and the nice lyrics too.
After a few days now, I wonder if it is a good idea to base our Provincial anthem on the national anthem of another country, and Belgium has no real logical link with Talossa or Cézembre. The French anthem would be a bit more logical geographically speaking, but it is the anthem of the country from which Cézembre seceeded on 1982.
Could we imagine another music ? more related to Brittany, such as in this : https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=m9mup3aA08Y
All suggestions welcome !
I took inspiration from Vuode, their anthem has the melody of La Marseillaise, so I don't see why ours can't have the melody of another anthem. It also used to happen with other countries.
In my opinion, the anthem itself is beautiful, and has links to the monarch.

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Title: Re: Provincial anthem?
Post by: Barclamïu da Miéletz on March 23, 2024, 11:24:03 AM
Quote from: þerxh Sant-Enogat on March 23, 2024, 10:15:13 AM
Quote from: Barclamïu da Miéletz on March 19, 2024, 03:35:15 AMWhat do you guys think? Melody could be Belgium's anthem "La Brabançonne" (https://filetransfer.io/data-package/JQxUbE4v#link)

Thanks Barclamïu for the proposal ! and the nice lyrics too.
After a few days now, I wonder if it is a good idea to base our Provincial anthem on the national anthem of another country, and Belgium has no real logical link with Talossa or Cézembre. The French anthem would be a bit more logical geographically speaking, but it is the anthem of the country from which Cézembre seceeded on 1982.
Could we imagine another music ? more related to Brittany, such as in this : https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=m9mup3aA08Y
All suggestions welcome !
OR I could compose the instrumental myself

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Title: Re: Provincial anthem?
Post by: Barclamïu da Miéletz on March 29, 2024, 10:59:50 AM
@þerxh Sant-Enogat I really don't see a problem that if our province were to have an anthem that it would base on a country's anthem. Atatürk uses Türkiye's anthem and Vuode has its own words but sung to the tune of the French anthem. (https://i.postimg.cc/tJ3W6ZP1/Zrzut-ekranu-2024-03-29-165555.png) So, I don't see a problem with our anthem having the melody of Belgium's anthem. In real life, countries used to use melodies of other countries for their anthems. Some even made melodies basing on a country's anthem (for example, Yugoslavia's anthem melody after 1945 was basing on the Polish anthem).
Title: Re: Provincial anthem?
Post by: Miestră Schivă, UrN on March 29, 2024, 05:59:08 PM
Fiovă's national anthem will be sung to this tune (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=A-ai4krk3L0), if we ever get around to writing words
Title: Re: Provincial anthem?
Post by: þerxh Sant-Enogat on March 30, 2024, 10:29:21 AM
Quote from: Barclamïu da Miéletz on March 29, 2024, 10:59:50 AM@þerxh Sant-Enogat I really don't see a problem that if our province were to have an anthem that it would base on a country's anthem. Atatürk uses Türkiye's anthem 
Yes, but Türkiye's anthem is logical for Atatürk.. As Il Canto Degli Italiani could be Benito's for the same reason. And.. you know.. French are always making jokes on Belgian natives :-) 
La Brabançonne (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rqdJE5losaM) is a nice anthem but would ring immediately Belgian for people in the Cézembre region.
Title: Re: Provincial anthem?
Post by: Bentxamì Puntmasleu on March 30, 2024, 02:47:50 PM
The lyrics of Vuode's provincial anthem uphold the supposed virtues of Robert Ben Madison (who, at the time of the writing, was no longer king (between his first and second reigns) but serving as Premier of Vuode) against the republicanism of Dan Lorentz and Bob Murphy. Oddly, the music is set to La Marseillaise.

We should probably get around to changing it.

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Title: Re: Provincial anthem?
Post by: Marcel Eðo Pairescu Tafial, UrGP on March 30, 2024, 03:30:24 PM
To be honest, I'm kinda glad that Maritiimi-Maxhestic doesn't have an anthem to replace. Knowing what Ian von Metairia was into back then, this could've ended horrendously...
Title: Re: Provincial anthem?
Post by: Barclamïu da Miéletz on March 30, 2024, 05:39:35 PM
Quote from: þerxh Sant-Enogat on March 30, 2024, 10:29:21 AM
Quote from: Barclamïu da Miéletz on March 29, 2024, 10:59:50 AM@þerxh Sant-Enogat I really don't see a problem that if our province were to have an anthem that it would base on a country's anthem. Atatürk uses Türkiye's anthem 
Yes, but Türkiye's anthem is logical for Atatürk.. As Il Canto Degli Italiani could be Benito's for the same reason. And.. you know.. French are always making jokes on Belgian natives :-) 
La Brabançonne (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rqdJE5losaM) is a nice anthem but would ring immediately Belgian for people in the Cézembre region.
I'll just compose my own music then.
Title: Re: Provincial anthem?
Post by: Barclamïu da Miéletz on March 30, 2024, 05:41:17 PM
Quote from: Bentxamì Puntmasleu on March 30, 2024, 02:47:50 PMThe lyrics of Vuode's provincial anthem uphold the supposed virtues of Robert Ben Madison (who, at the time of the writing, was no longer king (between his first and second reigns) but serving as Premier of Vuode) against the republicanism of Dan Lorentz and Bob Murphy. Oddly, the music is set to La Marseillaise.

We should probably get around to changing it.

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Maybe I could help by composing my own music.
Title: Re: Provincial anthem?
Post by: Barclamïu da Miéletz on March 30, 2024, 05:42:17 PM
If @þerxh Sant-Enogat and @Bentxamì Puntmasleu will like the idea of me composing the music, then it's settled.
Title: Re: Provincial anthem?
Post by: þerxh Sant-Enogat on March 30, 2024, 05:52:10 PM
Quote from: Barclamïu da Miéletz on March 30, 2024, 05:42:17 PMIf @þerxh Sant-Enogat and @Bentxamì Puntmasleu will like the idea of me composing the music, then it's settled.
Excellent idea !


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Title: Re: Provincial anthem?
Post by: Barclamïu da Miéletz on March 30, 2024, 05:54:19 PM
Quote from: þerxh Sant-Enogat on March 30, 2024, 05:52:10 PM
Quote from: Barclamïu da Miéletz on March 30, 2024, 05:42:17 PMIf @þerxh Sant-Enogat and @Bentxamì Puntmasleu will like the idea of me composing the music, then it's settled.
Excellent idea !


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I mean I do have some musical knowledge. I can nearly perfectly replicate songs in GarageBand sicne I have gotten an iPad from my school. Before that I have done it in BandLab, and before that, I had a looper hooked up to my keyboard (the musical instrument) and made the music using that.
Title: Re: Provincial anthem?
Post by: Barclamïu da Miéletz on April 04, 2024, 01:42:21 PM
So I guess it's settled then. I'm composing the melody to the anthem myself. Give me some time.
Title: Re: Provincial anthem?
Post by: xpb on April 07, 2024, 08:52:33 AM
Quote from: Barclamïu da Miéletz on April 04, 2024, 01:42:21 PMSo I guess it's settled then. I'm composing the melody to the anthem myself. Give me some time.

That is an excellent development!  I'm sure your creativity will shine through. 

One idea for the lyrics might be to have a blend of Talossan, French, and English lyrics?  Perhaps echoes in the different languages (similar to the Beatles "Michelle") or just words used as is (similar to Talking Heads "Psycho Killer")
Title: Re: Provincial anthem?
Post by: Barclamïu da Miéletz on April 07, 2024, 09:48:28 AM
Quote from: xpb on April 07, 2024, 08:52:33 AM
Quote from: Barclamïu da Miéletz on April 04, 2024, 01:42:21 PMSo I guess it's settled then. I'm composing the melody to the anthem myself. Give me some time.

That is an excellent development!  I'm sure your creativity will shine through. 

One idea for the lyrics might be to have a blend of Talossan, French, and English lyrics?  Perhaps echoes in the different languages (similar to the Beatles "Michelle") or just words used as is (similar to Talking Heads "Psycho Killer")

Or make a trilingual version. Just like Belgium.
Title: Re: Provincial anthem?
Post by: Barclamïu da Miéletz on April 07, 2024, 09:56:26 AM
Quote from: xpb on April 07, 2024, 08:52:33 AM
Quote from: Barclamïu da Miéletz on April 04, 2024, 01:42:21 PMSo I guess it's settled then. I'm composing the melody to the anthem myself. Give me some time.

That is an excellent development!  I'm sure your creativity will shine through. 

One idea for the lyrics might be to have a blend of Talossan, French, and English lyrics?  Perhaps echoes in the different languages (similar to the Beatles "Michelle") or just words used as is (similar to Talking Heads "Psycho Killer")

I could also be like Liechtenstein which uses the British anthem's melody but higher pitched.
Title: Re: Provincial anthem?
Post by: Barclamïu da Miéletz on April 07, 2024, 09:58:39 AM
Quote from: Barclamïu da Miéletz on April 07, 2024, 09:56:26 AM
Quote from: xpb on April 07, 2024, 08:52:33 AM
Quote from: Barclamïu da Miéletz on April 04, 2024, 01:42:21 PMSo I guess it's settled then. I'm composing the melody to the anthem myself. Give me some time.

That is an excellent development!  I'm sure your creativity will shine through. 

One idea for the lyrics might be to have a blend of Talossan, French, and English lyrics?  Perhaps echoes in the different languages (similar to the Beatles "Michelle") or just words used as is (similar to Talking Heads "Psycho Killer")

I could also be like Liechtenstein which uses the British anthem's melody but higher pitched.
I'll maybe do that. I'll just pitch the instrumental up and maybe alter it a little bit.
Title: Re: Provincial anthem?
Post by: Barclamïu da Miéletz on April 07, 2024, 12:51:28 PM
Did some tinkering with the audio (http://sndup.net/h5hy).
Title: Re: Provincial anthem?
Post by: Barclamïu da Miéletz on April 07, 2024, 02:55:41 PM
Quote from: Barclamïu da Miéletz on April 07, 2024, 12:51:28 PMDid some tinkering with the audio (http://sndup.net/h5hy).
@þerxh Sant-Enogat @xpb I know I didn't compose it myself. I couldn't bring a melody together. So I just went Liechtenstein and pitched up the melody. As I said, I have also altered a bit by slowing it down and extending the end.
Title: Re: Provincial anthem?
Post by: Barclamïu da Miéletz on April 08, 2024, 07:40:22 AM
Quote from: Barclamïu da Miéletz on April 07, 2024, 12:51:28 PMDid some tinkering with the audio (http://sndup.net/h5hy).
Heh, it sounds cheerful
Title: Re: Provincial anthem?
Post by: xpb on April 08, 2024, 11:03:06 PM
I stumbled around with a Fanfare to go with the anthem using Musescore

https://drive.google.com/file/d/15dz9fhHGgjYAqYN8urENvq9f4CbX3pOh/view?usp=sharing is the 12 bars for brass

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1qIwZFArd9a45UKHZ1AsPRmPCDMli2hoZ/view?usp=sharing is a synthetic performance

Title: Re: Provincial anthem?
Post by: Barclamïu da Miéletz on April 09, 2024, 03:10:09 AM
Quote from: xpb on April 08, 2024, 11:03:06 PMI stumbled around with a Fanfare to go with the anthem using Musescore

https://drive.google.com/file/d/15dz9fhHGgjYAqYN8urENvq9f4CbX3pOh/view?usp=sharing is the 12 bars for brass

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1qIwZFArd9a45UKHZ1AsPRmPCDMli2hoZ/view?usp=sharing is a synthetic performance


Noticed it's in C major. The melody was pitched up from F major to F# major, so I'll have to pitch the fanfare to F# major as well (I AM going to use it, sounds good)
Title: Re: Provincial anthem?
Post by: Barclamïu da Miéletz on April 09, 2024, 03:14:57 AM
Once again, who will translate the lyrics to Talossan and French? My vision is three separate versions for some more local (?) occasions and a trilingual version for more official occasions.
Title: Re: Provincial anthem?
Post by: Barclamïu da Miéletz on April 09, 2024, 03:16:26 AM
Quote from: Barclamïu da Miéletz on March 19, 2024, 04:10:38 AM
Quote from: Barclamïu da Miéletz on March 19, 2024, 03:35:15 AMWhat do you guys think? Melody could be Belgium's anthem "La Brabançonne" (https://filetransfer.io/data-package/JQxUbE4v#link)
Here are the lyrics:
The song of Cézembre

Oh dear Cézembre, oh holy land of freedom,
For Thee our hand, for Thee our heart!
For Thee our blood, oh dearest homeland,
We swear to you, oh Cézembre!
You went through troubles, our dearest land,
And we have helped Thee through!
Henceforth, your people will keep singing:
The Law, the King and Freedom high! (2x)
The Law, the King and Freedom high,
the Law, the King and Freedom high!
Again, the lyrics.
Title: Re: Provincial anthem?
Post by: Barclamïu da Miéletz on April 10, 2024, 05:28:25 AM
Quote from: Barclamïu da Miéletz on April 09, 2024, 03:16:26 AM
Quote from: Barclamïu da Miéletz on March 19, 2024, 04:10:38 AM
Quote from: Barclamïu da Miéletz on March 19, 2024, 03:35:15 AMWhat do you guys think? Melody could be Belgium's anthem "La Brabançonne" (https://filetransfer.io/data-package/JQxUbE4v#link)
Here are the lyrics:
The song of Cézembre

Oh dear Cézembre, oh holy land of freedom,
For Thee our hand, for Thee our heart!
For Thee our blood, oh dearest homeland,
We swear to you, oh Cézembre!
You went through troubles, our dearest land,
And we have helped Thee through!
Henceforth, your people will keep singing:
The Law, the King and Freedom high! (2x)
The Law, the King and Freedom high,
the Law, the King and Freedom high!
Again, the lyrics.
Maybe, JUST MAYBE I would do the French lyrics myself, using the French version of Belgium's anthem.
Title: Re: Provincial anthem?
Post by: þerxh Sant-Enogat on April 11, 2024, 03:49:16 AM
As I wrote previously, I don't think it is a good idea to base our Provincial anthem on the national anthem of another country, and Belgium has no real logical link with Talossa or Cézembre. Would we want that many think about Belgium when hearing our Anthem ?
Could we use another music ? may be more related to Brittany, such as in this :
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ulUCwzRbww4
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=m4WLR_gHrd8
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=m9mup3aA08Y
or such as the ones presented by @xpb ?

Title: Re: Provincial anthem?
Post by: Barclamïu da Miéletz on April 11, 2024, 03:52:45 AM
Quote from: þerxh Sant-Enogat on April 11, 2024, 03:49:16 AMAs I wrote previously, I don't think it is a good idea to base our Provincial anthem on the national anthem of another country, and Belgium has no real logical link with Talossa or Cézembre. Would we want that many think about Belgium when hearing our Anthem ?
Could we use another music ? may be more related to Brittany, such as in this :
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ulUCwzRbww4
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=m4WLR_gHrd8
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=m9mup3aA08Y
or such as the ones presented by @xpb ?


I really apologise, I couldn't bring a melody together.

So I wrote the lyrics for nothing then...
Title: Re: Provincial anthem?
Post by: Barclamïu da Miéletz on April 11, 2024, 03:55:17 AM
Let's just ditch the idea of an anthem for our province then. I wrote the lyrics for literally nothing, I can't bring a melody together, nothing. If some of you do want an anthem for Cézembre then you can do it yourself. I wrote lyrics that I thought will be used but they will have to unfortunately be scrapped. I feel somewhat disappointed...
Title: Re: Provincial anthem?
Post by: þerxh Sant-Enogat on April 11, 2024, 04:02:38 AM
Quote from: Barclamïu da Miéletz on April 11, 2024, 03:55:17 AMLet's just ditch the idea of an anthem for our province then. I wrote the lyrics for literally nothing, I can't bring a melody together, nothing. If some of you do want an anthem for Cézembre then you can do it yourself. I wrote lyrics that I thought will be used but they will have to unfortunately be scrapped. I feel somewhat disappointed...
Don't be disapointed, you did a very nice work ! The lyrics are very patriotic, and I am sure that we can use these on another musical theme.
And I don't know the opinion of the other Cézembréans, I do not decide alone, may be they are OK with the Belgium anthem ?
Title: Re: Provincial anthem?
Post by: Barclamïu da Miéletz on April 11, 2024, 04:03:45 AM
Quote from: þerxh Sant-Enogat on April 11, 2024, 04:02:38 AM
Quote from: Barclamïu da Miéletz on April 11, 2024, 03:55:17 AMLet's just ditch the idea of an anthem for our province then. I wrote the lyrics for literally nothing, I can't bring a melody together, nothing. If some of you do want an anthem for Cézembre then you can do it yourself. I wrote lyrics that I thought will be used but they will have to unfortunately be scrapped. I feel somewhat disappointed...
Don't be disapointed, you did a very nice work ! The lyrics are very patriotic, and I am sure that we can use these on another musical theme.
And I don't know the opinion of the other Cézembréans, I do not decide alone, may be they are OK with the Belgium anthem ?
Some Cézembreans like @xpb aren't in Europe at all, maybe they are fine with it.
I don't know if the lyrics will actually fit a new melody, I wrote them SPECIFICALLY to the melody van Campenhout composed. Whatever, we'll have to see...
Title: Re: Provincial anthem?
Post by: Barclamïu da Miéletz on April 11, 2024, 04:31:01 AM
@þerxh Sant-Enogat there is hope after all... I have a vision of making a melody that bases on Belgium's anthem and Denmark's civil anthem "Der er et yndigt land" (There is a Lovely Land). The second one has a very beautiful melody, so beautiful I will use it as base. I'll get to work as soon as I can.
Title: Re: Provincial anthem?
Post by: Sir Txec dal Nordselvă, UrB on April 11, 2024, 08:22:11 AM
Pardon my intrusion, but I'm sure there is some AI option out there that can create a unique musical arrangement that fits your lyrics.
Title: Re: Provincial anthem?
Post by: Barclamïu da Miéletz on April 11, 2024, 09:26:03 AM
Quote from: Sir Txec dal Nordselvă, UrB on April 11, 2024, 08:22:11 AMPardon my intrusion, but I'm sure there is some AI option out there that can create a unique musical arrangement that fits your lyrics.
Yeah nah I'm not using AI.
Title: Re: Provincial anthem?
Post by: Barclamïu da Miéletz on April 11, 2024, 10:10:08 AM
Quote from: Sir Txec dal Nordselvă, UrB on April 11, 2024, 08:22:11 AMPardon my intrusion, but I'm sure there is some AI option out there that can create a unique musical arrangement that fits your lyrics.
Ok no I think I will use AI to make a melody basing on Belgium's anthem and Denmark's civil anthem. Do you know any AI tools that could do just that?
Title: Re: Provincial anthem?
Post by: xpb on April 11, 2024, 10:06:42 PM
Quote from: Barclamïu da Miéletz on April 11, 2024, 10:10:08 AM
Quote from: Sir Txec dal Nordselvă, UrB on April 11, 2024, 08:22:11 AMPardon my intrusion, but I'm sure there is some AI option out there that can create a unique musical arrangement that fits your lyrics.
Ok no I think I will use AI to make a melody basing on Belgium's anthem and Denmark's civil anthem. Do you know any AI tools that could do just that?

Might just be able to do a mashup with the sheet musicm, but there was previous comment that the Belgium anthem might not ring true in Brittany (from someone in the vicinity)  https://musescore.com/user/21755791/scores/7904504 and https://musescore.com/user/1714461/scores/1432146

In that style I did a segue between Dangerous by Big Data and Feel It Still by Portugal. the Man.
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1ziE3rN0yS00RSiQ8QvVfro14EFdHb6z5/view?usp=sharing sheet music
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1Q8ObhDBzdXo0zsWCO1DfvXmYfGmrKdlL/view?usp=sharing mp3

Title: Re: Provincial anthem?
Post by: Barclamïu da Miéletz on April 12, 2024, 01:12:01 AM
Quote from: xpb on April 11, 2024, 10:06:42 PM
Quote from: Barclamïu da Miéletz on April 11, 2024, 10:10:08 AM
Quote from: Sir Txec dal Nordselvă, UrB on April 11, 2024, 08:22:11 AMPardon my intrusion, but I'm sure there is some AI option out there that can create a unique musical arrangement that fits your lyrics.
Ok no I think I will use AI to make a melody basing on Belgium's anthem and Denmark's civil anthem. Do you know any AI tools that could do just that?

Might just be able to do a mashup with the sheet musicm, but there was previous comment that the Belgium anthem might not ring true in Brittany (from someone in the vicinity)  https://musescore.com/user/21755791/scores/7904504 and https://musescore.com/user/1714461/scores/1432146

In that style I did a segue between Dangerous by Big Data and Feel It Still by Portugal. the Man.
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1ziE3rN0yS00RSiQ8QvVfro14EFdHb6z5/view?usp=sharing sheet music
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1Q8ObhDBzdXo0zsWCO1DfvXmYfGmrKdlL/view?usp=sharing mp3


As I said I would try to make a melody out of "La Brabançonne" and "Der er et yndigt land". Both anthems have awesome melodies.
Title: Re: Provincial anthem?
Post by: xpb on April 13, 2024, 07:27:43 PM
Quote from: Barclamïu da Miéletz on April 12, 2024, 01:12:01 AM
Quote from: xpb on April 11, 2024, 10:06:42 PM
Quote from: Barclamïu da Miéletz on April 11, 2024, 10:10:08 AM
Quote from: Sir Txec dal Nordselvă, UrB on April 11, 2024, 08:22:11 AMPardon my intrusion, but I'm sure there is some AI option out there that can create a unique musical arrangement that fits your lyrics.
Ok no I think I will use AI to make a melody basing on Belgium's anthem and Denmark's civil anthem. Do you know any AI tools that could do just that?

Might just be able to do a mashup with the sheet musicm, but there was previous comment that the Belgium anthem might not ring true in Brittany (from someone in the vicinity)  https://musescore.com/user/21755791/scores/7904504 and https://musescore.com/user/1714461/scores/1432146

In that style I did a segue between Dangerous by Big Data and Feel It Still by Portugal. the Man.
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1ziE3rN0yS00RSiQ8QvVfro14EFdHb6z5/view?usp=sharing sheet music
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1Q8ObhDBzdXo0zsWCO1DfvXmYfGmrKdlL/view?usp=sharing mp3


As I said I would try to make a melody out of "La Brabançonne" and "Der er et yndigt land". Both anthems have awesome melodies.

Not sure what tools you may use, but I took a look at fadr.com and that looks promising - it was pretty straightforward to upload the mp3s available at https://nationalanthems.info/ available of both.
Title: Re: Provincial anthem?
Post by: Barclamïu da Miéletz on May 03, 2024, 04:06:10 AM
And I forgot about this again
Title: Re: Provincial anthem?
Post by: Barclamïu da Miéletz on May 04, 2024, 01:57:24 PM
@þerxh Sant-Enogat
(https://i.postimg.cc/8kyBMKhL/Zrzut-ekranu-2024-05-04-205548.png)
Working on it right now
Title: Re: Provincial anthem?
Post by: Barclamïu da Miéletz on May 04, 2024, 05:24:23 PM
Quote from: Barclamïu da Miéletz on May 04, 2024, 01:57:24 PM@þerxh Sant-Enogat
(https://i.postimg.cc/8kyBMKhL/Zrzut-ekranu-2024-05-04-205548.png)
Working on it right now
Almost done with it.
Title: Re: Provincial anthem?
Post by: Barclamïu da Miéletz on May 04, 2024, 05:32:52 PM
Quote from: Barclamïu da Miéletz on May 04, 2024, 05:24:23 PM
Quote from: Barclamïu da Miéletz on May 04, 2024, 01:57:24 PM@þerxh Sant-Enogat
(https://i.postimg.cc/8kyBMKhL/Zrzut-ekranu-2024-05-04-205548.png)
Working on it right now
Almost done with it.
Can confirm I am done with the abomination of an anthem.
Title: Re: Provincial anthem?
Post by: Barclamïu da Miéletz on May 04, 2024, 05:40:34 PM
And underneath this post is the sheet music version of the abomination itself. (I'm trying not to cringe; it doesn't sound too professional)
Audio version of the abomination. (http://sndup.net/hxpm)
Title: Re: Provincial anthem?
Post by: þerxh Sant-Enogat on May 05, 2024, 02:49:46 AM
Well done Barclamïu ! I like this, it's original, intro is ceremonious and lyrical, then calmer and inspiring. Impatient to listen to the words on it !
Title: Re: Provincial anthem?
Post by: Barclamïu da Miéletz on May 05, 2024, 04:36:14 AM
Quote from: þerxh Sant-Enogat on May 05, 2024, 02:49:46 AMWell done Barclamïu ! I like this, it's original, intro is ceremonious and lyrical, then calmer and inspiring. Impatient to listen to the words on it !
The Sénéchal likes it... looks like this version will be the anthem.
Title: Re: Provincial anthem?
Post by: þerxh Sant-Enogat on May 05, 2024, 04:41:00 AM
Quote from: Barclamïu da Miéletz on May 05, 2024, 04:36:14 AM
Quote from: þerxh Sant-Enogat on May 05, 2024, 02:49:46 AMWell done Barclamïu ! I like this, it's original, intro is ceremonious and lyrical, then calmer and inspiring. Impatient to listen to the words on it !
The Sénéchal likes it... looks like this version will be the anthem.
let's wait for the opinion of other Cézembréans ! in the meanwhile, practise your singing skills, as the Province may need an official interpret for her Anthem
Title: Re: Provincial anthem?
Post by: Barclamïu da Miéletz on May 05, 2024, 04:43:59 AM
Quote from: þerxh Sant-Enogat on May 05, 2024, 04:41:00 AM
Quote from: Barclamïu da Miéletz on May 05, 2024, 04:36:14 AM
Quote from: þerxh Sant-Enogat on May 05, 2024, 02:49:46 AMWell done Barclamïu ! I like this, it's original, intro is ceremonious and lyrical, then calmer and inspiring. Impatient to listen to the words on it !
The Sénéchal likes it... looks like this version will be the anthem.
let's wait for the opinion of other Cézembréans ! in the meanwhile, practise your singing skills, as the Province may need an official interpret for her Anthem
Lucky to sing in my school choir I guess (although basso)
Title: Re: Provincial anthem?
Post by: Barclamïu da Miéletz on May 05, 2024, 07:54:37 AM
Quote from: þerxh Sant-Enogat on May 05, 2024, 04:41:00 AM
Quote from: Barclamïu da Miéletz on May 05, 2024, 04:36:14 AM
Quote from: þerxh Sant-Enogat on May 05, 2024, 02:49:46 AMWell done Barclamïu ! I like this, it's original, intro is ceremonious and lyrical, then calmer and inspiring. Impatient to listen to the words on it !
The Sénéchal likes it... looks like this version will be the anthem.
let's wait for the opinion of other Cézembréans ! in the meanwhile, practise your singing skills, as the Province may need an official interpret for her Anthem
Here's the poll thing (https://wittenberg.talossa.com/index.php?topic=3235.0).
Title: Re: Provincial anthem?
Post by: Barclamïu da Miéletz on May 05, 2024, 02:04:31 PM
@þerxh Sant-Enogat what if we made the anthem trilingual? Someone would have to translate the lyrics to Talossan and French though.
Title: Re: Provincial anthem?
Post by: þerxh Sant-Enogat on May 05, 2024, 02:56:10 PM
Quote from: Barclamïu da Miéletz on May 05, 2024, 02:04:31 PM@þerxh Sant-Enogat what if we made the anthem trilingual? Someone would have to translate the lyrics to Talossan and French though.
French I can surely
Title: Re: Provincial anthem?
Post by: Barclamïu da Miéletz on May 06, 2024, 01:11:09 AM
Quote from: þerxh Sant-Enogat on May 05, 2024, 02:56:10 PM
Quote from: Barclamïu da Miéletz on May 05, 2024, 02:04:31 PM@þerxh Sant-Enogat what if we made the anthem trilingual? Someone would have to translate the lyrics to Talossan and French though.
French I can surely
Are you willing to do that?
Title: Re: Provincial anthem?
Post by: þerxh Sant-Enogat on May 10, 2024, 08:57:50 AM
Quote from: Barclamïu da Miéletz on May 06, 2024, 01:11:09 AM
Quote from: þerxh Sant-Enogat on May 05, 2024, 02:56:10 PM
Quote from: Barclamïu da Miéletz on May 05, 2024, 02:04:31 PM@þerxh Sant-Enogat what if we made the anthem trilingual? Someone would have to translate the lyrics to Talossan and French though.
French I can surely
Are you willing to do that?


I've tried to keep the same number of measures per verse

The song of Cézembre

Oh dear Cézembre, oh holy land of freedom,
For Thee our hand, for Thee our heart!
For Thee our blood, oh dearest homeland,
We swear to you, oh Cézembre!
You went through troubles, our dearest land,
And we have helped Thee through!
Henceforth, your people will keep singing:
The Law, the King and Freedom high! (2x)
The Law, the King and Freedom high,
the Law, the King and Freedom high!
Ô Chère Cézembre, Pays de la liberté,
Pour toi notre bras, pour toi notre cœur !
Pour toi notre sang , Ô Patrie aimée
Nous te suivrons Ô Cézembre !
Tu as bien souffert, Ô notre terre
Et nous t'avons aidée !
C'est pourquoi ton peuple chantera toujours :
La Loi, le Roi, et la Liberté !  (2x)
La Loi, le Roi, et la Liberté !
La Loi, le Roi, et la Liberté !