Whereas, there is a continuing interest in encouraging the development of provincial subcultures, and
Whereas, cultural development is one potential route to which we can revitalize provincial activity, and
Whereas, there is one shining example of the successful development of a provincial subculture in the Cjovani Benitians, and
Whereas, one way to encourage the replication of this laudable Talossan subculture effort is to memorialize and celebrate one of its first instances.
Therefore, be it enacted, that a new ziua auservada or Day of Observance is created by adding subsection 4.3.8 of Title F of El Lexhatx to read as follows:
Quote7 April. Cjovani Day. This holiday honors a trailblazing example of Talossan subcultural development, the Cjovani Benitians, and serves as a day for Talossans to consider the potential for future subcultures in their own provinces.
Subsequent sections are to renumbered as necessary.
Uréu q'estadra så:
Breneir Tzaracomprada (Seneschal)
Quote from: Breneir Tzaracomprada on March 15, 2023, 08:19:15 PMWhereas, there is a continuing interest in encouraging the development of provincial subcultures, and
Whereas, cultural development is one potential route to which we can revitalize provincial activity, and
Whereas, there is one shining example of the successful development of a provincial subculture in the Cjovani Benitians, and
Whereas, one way to encourage the replication of this laudable Talossan subculture effort is to memorialize and celebrate one of its first instances.
Therefore, be it resolved, that a new ziua auservada or Day of Observance is created by adding a new section to El Lexhatx Section F at 4.3.8 to read as follows:
Quote7 April. Provincial Subcultures Day. This holiday honors a trailblazing example of Talossan subcultural development, the Cjovani Benitians, and serves as a day for Talossans to consider the potential for future subcultures in their own provinces.
Subsequent sections are to renumbered as necessary.
Uréu q'estadra så:
Breneir Tzaracomprada (Seneschal)
"El Lexhatx Section F at 4.3.8" could maybe be better written as "subsection 4.3.8 of Title F of el Lexhatx."
Quote from: Baron Alexandreu Davinescu on March 15, 2023, 08:21:12 PMQuote from: Breneir Tzaracomprada on March 15, 2023, 08:19:15 PMWhereas, there is a continuing interest in encouraging the development of provincial subcultures, and
Whereas, cultural development is one potential route to which we can revitalize provincial activity, and
Whereas, there is one shining example of the successful development of a provincial subculture in the Cjovani Benitians, and
Whereas, one way to encourage the replication of this laudable Talossan subculture effort is to memorialize and celebrate one of its first instances.
Therefore, be it resolved, that a new ziua auservada or Day of Observance is created by adding a new section to El Lexhatx Section F at 4.3.8 to read as follows:
Quote7 April. Provincial Subcultures Day. This holiday honors a trailblazing example of Talossan subcultural development, the Cjovani Benitians, and serves as a day for Talossans to consider the potential for future subcultures in their own provinces.
Subsequent sections are to renumbered as necessary.
Uréu q'estadra så:
Breneir Tzaracomprada (Seneschal)
"El Lexhatx Section F at 4.3.8" could maybe be better written as "subsection 4.3.8 of Title F of el Lexhatx."
Thank you Baron! Change made.
Structurally, with the Baron's revisions, I think this bill is going to operate like you want it to.
One other thought, if your bill is to congratulate the Cjovani, why not make it "Cjovani Day?" "Provincial subcultures day" feels kinda mealy.
Second point isn't a bar to the bill insofar as the CRL is concerned. Approve
I also approve this, and also (for what it's worth) think it would be better to directly honor the Cjovani, who are relatively unique for their trailblazing invention of a subculture within their province out of whole cloth and wacky notions.
Quote from: Baron Alexandreu Davinescu on March 18, 2023, 06:14:29 PMI also approve this, and also (for what it's worth) think it would be better to directly honor the Cjovani, who are relatively unique for their trailblazing invention of a subculture within their province out of whole cloth and wacky notions.
Quote from: Eiric S. Bornatfiglheu on March 18, 2023, 08:22:59 AMStructurally, with the Baron's revisions, I think this bill is going to operate like you want it to.
One other thought, if your bill is to congratulate the Cjovani, why not make it "Cjovani Day?" "Provincial subcultures day" feels kinda mealy.
Second point isn't a bar to the bill insofar as the CRL is concerned. Approve
Honestly, this was the original intent. I have revised it back to Cjovani Day. As
@Iason Taiwos might say: Famat voi?
Quote from: Sir Txec dal Nordselvă, UrB on April 25, 2023, 11:15:20 AMQuote from: Breneir Tzaracomprada on April 25, 2023, 10:30:23 AMThe Cjovani Ziua Auservada Bill was changed to reflect comments BY the CRL. Why would this prevent it from being clarked?
The bill was changed after approval. The remedy is of course to get approval once more and I will Clark it.
Folks, the Chancery is requesting re-approval of this bill. Would you all be able to re-confirm your approval of the bill?
@Eiric S. Bornatfiglheu @Baron Alexandreu Davinescu @Sir Lüc