It is my pleasure to announce the honoree for the 4th El Pretz Per Tomas Poetry Prize. But first please allow me to thank @owenedwards the originator of this prize.
Tric'hard Lenxheir is the winner of the 4th El Pretz Per Tomas Prize for his poem, I Dream.
This was an unusual prize year as all entrants posted publicly, there were just four entrants, and our winner recently left the Kingdom. S:reu Lenxheir was chosen before the latter event and it is the sincere wish of the Prize team that he will eventually return. The Prize Team and Fora Talossa will still plan for a special prize video presentation and transmitting the award money should we be able to make contact with Tric'hard.
OFFICIAL CITATION: Tric'hard Lenxheir (I Dream)
"I Dream"
I dream
The world turns
Shadows melt
Dream burns
Passion sated
Fear from hate
Passion lost
Fickle fate
Tangled limbs
Broken trees
Sun fades
Darkness sees
Quiet, fearful
Music flares
Dreams return
No one cares
Jumbled thoughts
Lost, confused
Body weak
Mind abused
Rain, lightning
Roar of thunder
Blowing wind
Life a blunder
Day is gone
Dream no longer
Soon to sleep
Calm the hunger
A final thanks to all poets who entered the contest for sharing their artistry with the Kingdom.
Tric'hard Lenxheir is the winner of the 4th El Pretz Per Tomas Prize for his poem, I Dream.
This was an unusual prize year as all entrants posted publicly, there were just four entrants, and our winner recently left the Kingdom. S:reu Lenxheir was chosen before the latter event and it is the sincere wish of the Prize team that he will eventually return. The Prize Team and Fora Talossa will still plan for a special prize video presentation and transmitting the award money should we be able to make contact with Tric'hard.
OFFICIAL CITATION: Tric'hard Lenxheir (I Dream)
Quote"I Dream" is a vivid depiction of the fragility of consciousness, where the boundary between dream and waking life dissolves into a sequence of haunting impressions. Despite the author's description of this piece as "jarbled," the Prize Team identifies a thorough and disciplined minimalism, S:reu Lenxheir has managed to craft a rhythm of compression and release, each quatrain unfolding like a flicker of brief, intense, and unresolved thought.
The poem's language is deliberately spare, yet it carries significant emotional weight. Phrases such as "Shadows melt / Dream burns" and "Mind abused" juxtapose the fleeting with the visceral, creating a tension between abstraction and embodiment. This interplay allows the poem to move fluidly between inner mental states and external natural imagery, from "Broken trees" to "Roar of thunder," suggesting a world in which environment and emotion mirror one another.
Structurally, the poem resists narrative cohesion in favor of fragmentation. Its clipped lines and shifting images evoke the disjointed logic of dreams, while also reflecting states of anxiety, exhaustion, and existential unease. The recurrence of elemental forces such as darkness, storm, and wind serves as a unifying motif, reinforcing the sense of an individual caught within cycles beyond their control.
What distinguishes "I Dream" is its refusal of resolution. The closing lines, "Soon to sleep / Calm the hunger," do not offer comfort so much as surrender, implying that rest itself may be another form of escape rather than restoration. In this way, the poem lingers in ambiguity, inviting the reader to confront the uneasy continuity between dreaming, suffering, and waking life. For its disciplined brevity, evocative imagery, and compelling portrayal of inner turbulence, "I Dream" stands as a striking exploration of the mind's darker currents.
"I Dream"
I dream
The world turns
Shadows melt
Dream burns
Passion sated
Fear from hate
Passion lost
Fickle fate
Tangled limbs
Broken trees
Sun fades
Darkness sees
Quiet, fearful
Music flares
Dreams return
No one cares
Jumbled thoughts
Lost, confused
Body weak
Mind abused
Rain, lightning
Roar of thunder
Blowing wind
Life a blunder
Day is gone
Dream no longer
Soon to sleep
Calm the hunger
A final thanks to all poets who entered the contest for sharing their artistry with the Kingdom.
