WHEREAS our immigration information disclosure practices fail the 'reasonable person' test in that a reasonable person would not assume that information provided to Talossan Immigration in confidence would be posted in plain sight of Talossan citizens on Wittenberg, and
WHEREAS this practice only becomes known to prospective immigrants after they have provided their personal information by way of a contact form, and
WHEREAS some prospective immigrants would redact some elements from their application or possibly even decline to apply for citizenship in the first place if they were aware that their information will be posted on Wittenberg
THEREFORE BE IT ENACTED by the King, Cosâ and Senäts of Talossa in Ziu assembled that El Lexhátx E.11 shall be amended by addition of the following section:
11.5 At the time of the initial Immigration application, prior to submission of the form, the prospective must be notified in writing that as part of the approval process, their application — excluding contact information — will be posted on a forum where it can be viewed by existing citizens.
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Sevastáin Pinátsch
As it is written above, including the preambulatory clauses, I would vote in favor of this bill if/when clarked. However, I would suggest some edits for the sake of style:
"At the time of the initial Immigration application, prior to submission of the form, the prospective
must shall be notified in writing that as part of the approval process
[comma removed] their application
— excluding contact information — [no more dashes] will be posted on a forum where it can be viewed by existing citizens,
excluding such personal contact information as their physical place(s) of residence, their email address(es), their phone number(s), and other details which are by law or which ought to be explicitly confidential."
All together: "At the time of the initial Immigration application, prior to submission of the form, the prospective shall be notified in writing that as part of the approval process their application will be posted on a forum where it can be viewed by existing citizens, excluding such personal contact information as their physical place(s) of residence, their email address(es), their phone number(s), and other details which are by law or which ought to be explicitly confidential."
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