Quote from: Sevastáin Pinátsch on January 06, 2020, 02:31:13 PM
WHEREAS our immigration information disclosure practices fail the 'reasonable person' test in that a reasonable person would not assume that information provided to Talossan Immigration in confidence would be posted in plain sight of Talossan citizens on Wittenberg, and
WHEREAS this practice only becomes known to prospective immigrants after they have provided their personal information by way of a contact form, and
WHEREAS some prospective immigrants would redact some elements from their application or possibly even decline to apply for citizenship in the first place if they were aware that their information will be posted on Wittenberg

THEREFORE BE IT ENACTED by the King, Cosâ and Senäts of Talossa in Ziu assembled that El Lexhátx E.11 shall be amended by addition of the following section:

11.5 At the time of the initial Immigration application, prior to submission of the form, the prospective must be notified in writing that as part of the approval process, their application — excluding contact information — will be posted on a forum where it can be viewed by existing citizens.

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Sevastáin Pinátsch

As it is written above, including the preambulatory clauses, I would vote in favor of this bill if/when clarked. However, I would suggest some edits for the sake of style:

"At the time of the initial Immigration application, prior to submission of the form, the prospective must shall be notified in writing that as part of the approval process [comma removed] their application — excluding contact information — [no more dashes] will be posted on a forum where it can be viewed by existing citizens, excluding such personal contact information as their physical place(s) of residence, their email address(es), their phone number(s), and other details which are by law or which ought to be explicitly confidential."

All together: "At the time of the initial Immigration application, prior to submission of the form, the prospective shall be notified in writing that as part of the approval process their application will be posted on a forum where it can be viewed by existing citizens, excluding such personal contact information as their physical place(s) of residence, their email address(es), their phone number(s), and other details which are by law or which ought to be explicitly confidential."

I have posted there my nomination for the Mençei as well as my thoughts on Standing Rule 3.

Well, this is why I asked  :o  Why "deo Vao", instead "del Val"? Does the letter L represent a different phoneme in Talossan?

If my only choices were the two, I'm partial to "Açafat del Val". How would it be pronounced?

(From old Witt...)

@Breneir, it is my own interpretation of the provincial Constitution that you must distribute the Nimlet seats within 10 days of the certification of the election by the Chancery (calling Glüc). Whenever that happens, you may/could use this thread as a template or starting point.

Sincere congratulations to you! I am looking forward to working with you for the good of Florencia!