[CRL] The Cjovani Ziua Auservada Bill

Started by Breneir Tzaracomprada, March 15, 2023, 08:19:15 PM

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Breneir Tzaracomprada

Whereas, there is a continuing interest in encouraging the development of provincial subcultures, and

Whereas, cultural development is one potential route to which we can revitalize provincial activity, and

Whereas, there is one shining example of the successful development of a provincial subculture in the Cjovani Benitians, and

Whereas, one way to encourage the replication of this laudable Talossan subculture effort is to memorialize and celebrate one of its first instances.

Therefore, be it enacted, that a new ziua auservada or Day of Observance is created by adding subsection 4.3.8 of Title F of El Lexhatx to read as follows:

Quote7 April. Cjovani Day. This holiday honors a trailblazing example of Talossan subcultural development, the Cjovani Benitians, and serves as a day for Talossans to consider the potential for future subcultures in their own provinces.

Subsequent sections are to renumbered as necessary.

Uréu q'estadra så:
Breneir Tzaracomprada (Seneschal)


Distain, MC
Fighting the good fight

Baron Alexandreu Davinescu

Quote from: Breneir Tzaracomprada on March 15, 2023, 08:19:15 PMWhereas, there is a continuing interest in encouraging the development of provincial subcultures, and

Whereas, cultural development is one potential route to which we can revitalize provincial activity, and

Whereas, there is one shining example of the successful development of a provincial subculture in the Cjovani Benitians, and

Whereas, one way to encourage the replication of this laudable Talossan subculture effort is to memorialize and celebrate one of its first instances.

Therefore, be it resolved, that a new ziua auservada or Day of Observance is created by adding a new section to El Lexhatx Section F at 4.3.8 to read as follows:

Quote7 April. Provincial Subcultures Day. This holiday honors a trailblazing example of Talossan subcultural development, the Cjovani Benitians, and serves as a day for Talossans to consider the potential for future subcultures in their own provinces.

Subsequent sections are to renumbered as necessary.

Uréu q'estadra så:
Breneir Tzaracomprada (Seneschal)


"El Lexhatx Section F at 4.3.8" could maybe be better written as "subsection 4.3.8 of Title F of el Lexhatx."
Alexandreu Davinescu, Baron Davinescu del Vilatx Freiric del Vilatx Freiric es Guaír del Sabor Talossan


Bitter struggles deform their participants in subtle, complicated ways. ― Zadie Smith
Revolution is an art that I pursue rather than a goal I expect to achieve. ― Robert Heinlein

Breneir Tzaracomprada

Quote from: Baron Alexandreu Davinescu on March 15, 2023, 08:21:12 PM
Quote from: Breneir Tzaracomprada on March 15, 2023, 08:19:15 PMWhereas, there is a continuing interest in encouraging the development of provincial subcultures, and

Whereas, cultural development is one potential route to which we can revitalize provincial activity, and

Whereas, there is one shining example of the successful development of a provincial subculture in the Cjovani Benitians, and

Whereas, one way to encourage the replication of this laudable Talossan subculture effort is to memorialize and celebrate one of its first instances.

Therefore, be it resolved, that a new ziua auservada or Day of Observance is created by adding a new section to El Lexhatx Section F at 4.3.8 to read as follows:

Quote7 April. Provincial Subcultures Day. This holiday honors a trailblazing example of Talossan subcultural development, the Cjovani Benitians, and serves as a day for Talossans to consider the potential for future subcultures in their own provinces.

Subsequent sections are to renumbered as necessary.

Uréu q'estadra så:
Breneir Tzaracomprada (Seneschal)


"El Lexhatx Section F at 4.3.8" could maybe be better written as "subsection 4.3.8 of Title F of el Lexhatx."

Thank you Baron! Change made.


Distain, MC
Fighting the good fight

Eiric S. Bornatfiglheu

Structurally, with the Baron's revisions, I think this bill is going to operate like you want it to.

One other thought, if your bill is to congratulate the Cjovani, why not make it "Cjovani Day?"  "Provincial subcultures day" feels kinda mealy.

Second point isn't a bar to the bill insofar as the CRL is concerned.  Approve
Eiric S. Bornatfiglheu
Chisleu Bruno of the NPW
Senator from Benito

Baron Alexandreu Davinescu

I also approve this, and also (for what it's worth) think it would be better to directly honor the Cjovani, who are relatively unique for their trailblazing invention of a subculture within their province out of whole cloth and wacky notions.
Alexandreu Davinescu, Baron Davinescu del Vilatx Freiric del Vilatx Freiric es Guaír del Sabor Talossan


Bitter struggles deform their participants in subtle, complicated ways. ― Zadie Smith
Revolution is an art that I pursue rather than a goal I expect to achieve. ― Robert Heinlein

Iason Taiwos

Quote from: Baron Alexandreu Davinescu on March 18, 2023, 06:14:29 PMI also approve this, and also (for what it's worth) think it would be better to directly honor the Cjovani, who are relatively unique for their trailblazing invention of a subculture within their province out of whole cloth and wacky notions.
Wacky notions? 😡 (😂)

Breneir Tzaracomprada

Quote from: Baron Alexandreu Davinescu on March 18, 2023, 06:14:29 PMI also approve this, and also (for what it's worth) think it would be better to directly honor the Cjovani, who are relatively unique for their trailblazing invention of a subculture within their province out of whole cloth and wacky notions.

Quote from: Eiric S. Bornatfiglheu on March 18, 2023, 08:22:59 AMStructurally, with the Baron's revisions, I think this bill is going to operate like you want it to.

One other thought, if your bill is to congratulate the Cjovani, why not make it "Cjovani Day?"  "Provincial subcultures day" feels kinda mealy.

Second point isn't a bar to the bill insofar as the CRL is concerned.  Approve

Honestly, this was the original intent. I have revised it back to Cjovani Day. As @Iason Taiwos might say: Famat voi?



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Fighting the good fight

Breneir Tzaracomprada

Quote from: Sir Txec dal Nordselvă, UrB on April 25, 2023, 11:15:20 AM
Quote from: Breneir Tzaracomprada on April 25, 2023, 10:30:23 AMThe Cjovani Ziua Auservada Bill was changed to reflect comments BY the CRL. Why would this prevent it from being clarked?


The bill was changed after approval. The remedy is of course to get approval once more and I will Clark it.

Folks, the Chancery is requesting re-approval of this bill. Would you all be able to re-confirm your approval of the bill? @Eiric S. Bornatfiglheu @Baron Alexandreu Davinescu @Sir Lüc


Distain, MC
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Baron Alexandreu Davinescu

Alexandreu Davinescu, Baron Davinescu del Vilatx Freiric del Vilatx Freiric es Guaír del Sabor Talossan


Bitter struggles deform their participants in subtle, complicated ways. ― Zadie Smith
Revolution is an art that I pursue rather than a goal I expect to achieve. ― Robert Heinlein

Sir Lüc

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Eiric S. Bornatfiglheu

Eiric S. Bornatfiglheu
Chisleu Bruno of the NPW
Senator from Benito