[CRL] The One Milestone At A Time Act

[Breneir Tzaracomprada]

Whereas, every Talossan goes through meaningful milestones over the course of their lives, and

Whereas, it is a reasonable prerogative of the Kingdom to participate in celebrating the most meaningful of these milestones, and

Whereas, the longevity of each citizen's membership in the Kingdom is one of the most meaningful of milestones for each Talossan.

Therefore, be it enacted, that a new section of Title D of El Lexhatx (2.1.2) shall be added as follows:

D 2.1.2: Each citizen meeting specific time thresholds as a Talossan citizen, may request a certificate, signed by the Crown and the Seneschal. The citizenship milestones are 5 years, 10 years, 20 years, and 50 years.

Uréu q'estadra så:
Breneir Tzaracomprada (Seneschal)
Baron Alexandreu Davinescu (Distain)

[Baron Alexandreu Davinescu]

" is added under D.1 The Government in El Lexhatx reading as follows:" could maybe be "shall be added as subsection 1.6 of Title D of el Lexhatx, reading as follows:"

[Breneir Tzaracomprada]

" is added under D.1 The Government in El Lexhatx reading as follows:" could maybe be "shall be added as subsection 1.6 of Title D of el Lexhatx, reading as follows:"

Thanks Baron. Change made.

[esbornatfiglheu]

So the way this reads to me, and I'm not sure this is the intention, is that the anniversaries are: 5, 10, and 35 (which is 25 years thereafter [which means "after that time"]).  You might just want to trim this down and lead with something like

"Each citizen, upon being a citizen for 5, 10, 25, or 50 years" may request a certificate...."

Honestly, I think the bill SHOULD top out at 25 or 50, because if you're a citizen passing milestones beyond those... the Ziu and King really ought to be passing special legislation for you.

[Breneir Tzaracomprada]

So the way this reads to me, and I'm not sure this is the intention, is that the anniversaries are: 5, 10, and 35 (which is 25 years thereafter [which means "after that time"]).  You might just want to trim this down and lead with something like

"Each citizen, upon being a citizen for 5, 10, 25, or 50 years" may request a certificate...."

Honestly, I think the bill SHOULD top out at 25 or 50, because if you're a citizen passing milestones beyond those... the Ziu and King really ought to be passing special legislation for you.

Excellent suggestions. I've made the changes.

[Baron Alexandreu Davinescu]

I approve this bill; I apologize for not being clear in that.  @Eiric S. Bornatfiglheu ?

[esbornatfiglheu]

Oh yes!  In altered form, approve.  Clark it.