Nearly all biographies have bias in them. Let's not lose sight of that. Also, let's not lose sight of the fact that you didn't want to contribute yourself. We don't need to rehash the whys and wherefores of why you aren't contributing but I don't think you can complain about it being "one-sided" while quite literally taking yourself out of it.
Of course all histories have a bias, but credible histories actively work at minimizing it (unless they're just blatant propaganda, which I don't think is the intention here). I wouldn't have commented except that one of the authors is the Seneschal and she just said she wanted to make this mandatory reading for all new immigrants. Certainly an official and mandatory
state-sponsored history should try to be unbiased.
You guys have a pretty distinct vision, but making this thing the official version of events is beyond the pale right now. It's a narrative, not really a history. Here's one paragraph as example:
In late 2002, Cavéir and Gariçéir teamed up to form the Grey Congress Party, beating out Ben's announcement of his revival of the old Black Hand Party with Wes Aquilâ by about two days.[30] Ben's pocket-votes would go with him, and he would become the most powerful political force in the country. Gödafrïeu Valcádac'h suddenly found himself at the head of a three-way coalition. A full accounting - from GV's perspective, at least - of the years 2002-2004 in Talossa is found in his book A Nation Sundered, now in its third edition, having been republished in 2019. He gives a very quick summation of events in his own words below.
To be succinct, the whole thing was the biggest clusterf**k in Talossan history, but can be summarized thusly:
In October 2003, I had been PM since 25 June 2002 and wanted to step down. I had been incommunicado for a week (my fault on that), and it was clear to me having Chirisch Cavéir as my Deputy Prime Minister, ready to take over when I was done as PM, was the perfect way to leave office.
What I was unaware of was when Chirisch and Queen Amadâ met at TalossaFest held a few months earlier, they haaaaaated each other. There was no way in hell Ben and Amadâ were going to be happy with Cavéir as Seneschál, and they did not accept my selection of him.[31]
This was written by GV. The first citation is this: "G. Valcádac'h, personal recollection." The second reference isn't a citation at all; it's a quote from Chirisch Cavéir explicitly disagreeing with the quote presented in the main narrative. There are no other references to support the account. No one else is quoted in the main narrative of these events, and no other perspective is even hinted-at.
In other words, this is GV's personal narrative, not a history. I'm not going to nitpick, but it's very clearly written from his perspective and centered on him. And there's nothing wrong with that -- we need those! -- but we shouldn't pretend it's some kind of objective history at this point. A large portion of an entire year of history is presented just in summary by GV in the first person. GV himself said that there should be other perspectives.
Even if we wanted to make the personal narratives of GV and Miestra -- the only contributors -- into the official state history, surely this isn't ready for primetime. The heavy reliance on their memories is a widespread problem. The references seem to be almost exclusively bits of Robert I's history right up until footnote 20 -- literally the very moment in the history when Miestra enters the picture -- and then literally 87% of the references are either GV's memory, Miestra's memory, or their side commentary. And it just plain needs more work! The first Wittenberg was created in 1996 or 1997, it says, grabbing another bit at random. Which is it? Where is the reference to support this assertion, or is it just someone's best memory? Impossible to say.
There's nothing wrong with this narrative. It's fine for what it is. But the Seneschal is pitching it as mandatory state history for new immigrants, so please take it seriously.
