D:na Seneschal:
Thank you. Two copyediting suggestions: the bill ends with a "4" after a list of "3.x," which is confusing. You might want to adopt the "FURTHERMORE" formulation for multiple effective clauses, which is suggested to prevent just such confusion, or some other change to make this easier to parse. Secondly, the bill ends by stating that a proposal must be introduced, but clearly that is unnecessary if the people desire the status quo, so you might want to change that, too.