CRL Committee for the 57th Cosa

[Baron Alexandreu Davinescu]

There are no other logistical problems with the bill, so it seems good to go.

[esbornatfiglheu]

Agreed that it is a sound bill.

[Breneir Tzaracomprada]

Submitting The Loud Town Crier Act for review.

The Loud Town Crier Act

Whereas, current election regulations require the Secretary of State to post preliminary election results to only Wittenberg, and

Whereas, it is broadly agreed that Wittenberg, while an important aspect of Talossan life, is not Talossa itself, and

Whereas, it is a reasonable act of public interest to ensure that news of Talossan elections is made available to as many Talossans as possible, and

Whereas, this amending of election notification requirements will result in minimal additional burden on the Chancery.

Therefore, El Lexhatx B. 13.5 is amended to read as follows (changes in bold):

Immediately following the Election Deadline, the Secretary of State shall post unofficial elections results on Wittenberg, transmit these results by email to citizens allowing contact by the Chancery, and notify the members of the Commission that the unofficial results have been posted.

Uréu q'estadra så:
Breneir Tzaracomprada (Sen-FL, TNC)

[esbornatfiglheu]

Submitting The Loud Town Crier Act for review.

The Loud Town Crier Act

Whereas, current election regulations require the Secretary of State to post preliminary election results to only Wittenberg, and

Whereas, it is broadly agreed that Wittenberg, while an important aspect of Talossan life, is not Talossa itself, and

Whereas, it is a reasonable act of public interest to ensure that news of Talossan elections is made available to as many Talossans as possible, and

Whereas, this amending of election notification requirements will result in minimal additional burden on the Chancery.

Therefore, El Lexhatx B. 13.5 is amended to read as follows (changes in bold):

Immediately following the Election Deadline, the Secretary of State shall post unofficial elections results on Wittenberg, transmit these results by email to citizens allowing contact by the Chancery, and notify the members of the Commission that the unofficial results have been posted.

Uréu q'estadra så:
Breneir Tzaracomprada (Sen-FL, TNC)

I see nothing wrong with it.

[Tric'hard Lenxheir]

I would like to ask the committee to review this bill. Thank you.

THE NAMING THE NATIONAL TEAMS ACT

Whereas El Lexhatx currently shows that we have National NFL, NBA and MLB teams but no NHL team and the former are named in separate sections (Section F paragraphs 25, 32 and 33 respectively). Let Section F Paragraph 25 which currently reads "25. The Green Bay Packers shall be Talossa's Official NFL Team, and it will remain so until such time as the nation is able to field its own NFL team to contest the American teams. The Ziu officially authorises loyal Talossan citizens to refer to the team, heretofore known as the "Green Bay Packers," as the "Florenciâ Packers." (23RZ40, 23RZ43)"  be changed to read


"25. Until such time as our great nation is able to field our own teams in the respective leagues the following teams will be recognized as the Talossan National Teams.

25.1 The Green Bay Packers shall be Talossa's Official NFL Team, The Ziu officially authorises loyal Talossan citizens to refer to the team, heretofore known as the "Green Bay Packers," as the "Florenciâ Packers."

25.2 The Milwaukee Brewers shall be Talossa's Official MLB Team, the Ziu officially authorises loyal Talossan citizens to refer to the team, heretofore known as the "Milwaukee Brewers" as the "Maricopa Brewers"

25.3 The Milwaukee Bucks shall be Talossa's Official NBA Team, the Ziu officially authorises loyal Talossan citizens to refer to the team, heretofore known as the "Milwaukee Bucks" as the "Benito Bucks"

25.4 The Nashville Predators shall be Talossa's Official NHL Team, the Ziu officially authorises loyal Talossan citizens to refer to the team, heretofore known as the "Nashville Predators" as the "Cézembre Predators"

25.5 The Milwaukee Admirals shall be Talossa's Official AHL Team, the Ziu officially authorises loyal Talossan citizens to refer to the team, heretofore known as the "Milwaukee Admirals" as the "Maritiimi-Maxhestic Admirals"

Also let section F paragraphs 32, 33 and 38 be stricken from El Lexhatx.

This organizes all of our recognized national teams under one paragraph making them easier to locate. The Nashville Predators were chosen because our neighbors in Wisconsin may declare war on us if we chose either Chicago or Minnesota and because one member said he could not in good conscience root for the team from Detroit and I chose Cézembre because the geographically closer provinces already have teams and sometimes it seems that Cézembre is the forgotten province.


Uréu q'estadra så:
Tric'hard Lenxheir (MC-TNC)
Mic'haglh Autófil, MoFA (MC-PDR)

[Miestră Schivă, UrN]

Can my colleagues give a look-see to the Tear Down This Wall, Finally bill?

[Miestră Schivă, UrN]

I would suggest just changing the punctuation a bit to make it more "standard", as below:

I would like to ask the committee to review this bill. Thank you.

THE NAMING THE NATIONAL TEAMS ACT

Whereas El Lexhatx currently shows that we have National NFL, NBA and MLB teams but no NHL team and the former are named in separate sections (Section F paragraphs 25, 32 and 33 respectively). Let Section F Paragraph 25 which currently reads "25. The Green Bay Packers shall be Talossa's Official NFL Team, and it will remain so until such time as the nation is able to field its own NFL team to contest the American teams. The Ziu officially authorises loyal Talossan citizens to refer to the team, heretofore known as the "Green Bay Packers," as the "Florenciâ Packers." (23RZ40, 23RZ43)"  be changed to read


"25. Until such time as our great nation is able to field our own teams in the respective leagues the following teams will be recognized as the Talossan National Teams.

25.1 The Green Bay Packers shall be Talossa's Official NFL Team. The Ziu officially authorises loyal Talossan citizens to refer to the team, heretofore known as the "Green Bay Packers," as the "Florenciâ Packers."

25.2 The Milwaukee Brewers shall be Talossa's Official MLB Team. The Ziu officially authorises loyal Talossan citizens to refer to the team, heretofore known as the "Milwaukee Brewers," as the "Maricopa Brewers."

25.3 The Milwaukee Bucks shall be Talossa's Official NBA Team. The Ziu officially authorises loyal Talossan citizens to refer to the team, heretofore known as the "Milwaukee Bucks," as the "Benito Bucks."

25.4 The Nashville Predators shall be Talossa's Official NHL Team. The Ziu officially authorises loyal Talossan citizens to refer to the team, heretofore known as the "Nashville Predators," as the "Cézembre Predators."

25.5 The Milwaukee Admirals shall be Talossa's Official AHL Team. The Ziu officially authorises loyal Talossan citizens to refer to the team, heretofore known as the "Milwaukee Admirals," as the "Maritiimi-Maxhestic Admirals."

Also let section F paragraphs 32, 33 and 38 be stricken from El Lexhatx.

This organizes all of our recognized national teams under one paragraph making them easier to locate. The Nashville Predators were chosen because our neighbors in Wisconsin may declare war on us if we chose either Chicago or Minnesota and because one member said he could not in good conscience root for the team from Detroit and I chose Cézembre because the geographically closer provinces already have teams and sometimes it seems that Cézembre is the forgotten province.


Uréu q'estadra så:
Tric'hard Lenxheir (MC-TNC)
Mic'haglh Autófil, MoFA (MC-PDR)

[Miestră Schivă, UrN]

And can I beg humbly for the addition of the following? This has been a hobbyhorse of mine from a long time back.

25.6 The Milwaukee Wave shall be Talossa's Official Major Arena Soccer League Team. The Ziu officially authorises loyal Talossan citizens to refer to the team, heretofore known as the "Milwaukee Wave," as the "Fiovă Wave."

[Baron Alexandreu Davinescu]

Submitting The Loud Town Crier Act for review.

The Loud Town Crier Act

Whereas, current election regulations require the Secretary of State to post preliminary election results to only Wittenberg, and

Whereas, it is broadly agreed that Wittenberg, while an important aspect of Talossan life, is not Talossa itself, and

Whereas, it is a reasonable act of public interest to ensure that news of Talossan elections is made available to as many Talossans as possible, and

Whereas, this amending of election notification requirements will result in minimal additional burden on the Chancery.

Therefore, El Lexhatx B. 13.5 is amended to read as follows (changes in bold):

Immediately following the Election Deadline, the Secretary of State shall post unofficial elections results on Wittenberg, transmit these results by email to citizens allowing contact by the Chancery, and notify the members of the Commission that the unofficial results have been posted.

Uréu q'estadra så:
Breneir Tzaracomprada (Sen-FL, TNC)

Looks good.

[Baron Alexandreu Davinescu]

Can my colleagues give a look-see to the Tear Down This Wall, Finally bill?

Add directions to renumber the title, please.

[Miestră Schivă, UrN]

Can my colleagues give a look-see to the Tear Down This Wall, Finally bill?

Add directions to renumber the title, please.

I will if the Mençéi agrees that's what we should do, but renumbering El Lex every time we delete a passage has led us into trouble in the past, because of broken cross-referencing from other laws. (I assume you note that A.17 is already blank.)

[Baron Alexandreu Davinescu]

Can my colleagues give a look-see to the Tear Down This Wall, Finally bill?

Add directions to renumber the title, please.

I will if the Mençéi agrees that's what we should do, but renumbering El Lex every time we delete a passage has led us into trouble in the past, because of broken cross-referencing from other laws. (I assume you note that A.17 is already blank.)

Fair point.  Simply direct the further deletion of Lexh.C.2.6.5, then.  That's the only reference to A.9.

[Tric'hard Lenxheir]

And can I beg humbly for the addition of the following? This has been a hobbyhorse of mine from a long time back.

25.6 The Milwaukee Wave shall be Talossa's Official Major Arena Soccer League Team. The Ziu officially authorises loyal Talossan citizens to refer to the team, heretofore known as the "Milwaukee Wave," as the "Fiovă Wave."

I was surprised that i didn't find a soccer team in El Lex...I would definitely be open to the addition

[Tric'hard Lenxheir]

And can I beg humbly for the addition of the following? This has been a hobbyhorse of mine from a long time back.

25.6 The Milwaukee Wave shall be Talossa's Official Major Arena Soccer League Team. The Ziu officially authorises loyal Talossan citizens to refer to the team, heretofore known as the "Milwaukee Wave," as the "Fiovă Wave."

How is this?

THE NAMING THE NATIONAL TEAMS ACT

Whereas El Lexhatx currently shows that we have National NFL, NBA and MLB teams but no NHL team and the former are named in separate sections (Section F paragraphs 25, 32 and 33 respectively). Let Section F Paragraph 25 which currently reads "25. The Green Bay Packers shall be Talossa's Official NFL Team, and it will remain so until such time as the nation is able to field its own NFL team to contest the American teams. The Ziu officially authorises loyal Talossan citizens to refer to the team, heretofore known as the "Green Bay Packers," as the "Florenciâ Packers." (23RZ40, 23RZ43)"  be changed to read


"25. Until such time as our great nation is able to field our own teams in the respective leagues the following teams will be recognized as the Talossan National Teams.

25.1 The Green Bay Packers shall be Talossa's Official NFL Team. The Ziu officially authorises loyal Talossan citizens to refer to the team, heretofore known as the "Green Bay Packers," as the "Florenciâ Packers."

25.2 The Milwaukee Brewers shall be Talossa's Official MLB Team. The Ziu officially authorises loyal Talossan citizens to refer to the team, heretofore known as the "Milwaukee Brewers," as the "Maricopa Brewers."

25.3 The Milwaukee Bucks shall be Talossa's Official NBA Team. The Ziu officially authorises loyal Talossan citizens to refer to the team, heretofore known as the "Milwaukee Bucks," as the "Benito Bucks."

25.4 The Nashville Predators shall be Talossa's Official NHL Team. The Ziu officially authorises loyal Talossan citizens to refer to the team, heretofore known as the "Nashville Predators," as the "Cézembre Predators."

25.5 The Milwaukee Admirals shall be Talossa's Official AHL Team. The Ziu officially authorises loyal Talossan citizens to refer to the team, heretofore known as the "Milwaukee Admirals," as the "Maritiimi-Maxhestic Admirals."

25.6 The Milwaukee Wave shall be Talossa's Official Major Arena Soccer League Team. The Ziu officially authorises loyal Talossan citizens to refer to the team, heretofore known as the "Milwaukee Wave," as the "Fiovă Wave."

Also let section F paragraphs 32, 33 and 38 be stricken from El Lexhatx.

This organizes all of our recognized national teams under one paragraph making them easier to locate. The Nashville Predators were chosen because our neighbors in Wisconsin may declare war on us if we chose either Chicago or Minnesota and because one member said he could not in good conscience root for the team from Detroit and I chose Cézembre because the geographically closer provinces already have teams and sometimes it seems that Cézembre is the forgotten province.


Uréu q'estadra så:
Tric'hard Lenxheir (MC-TNC)
Mic'haglh Autófil, MoFA (MC-PDR)

[Miestră Schivă, UrN]

Fair point.  Simply direct the further deletion of Lexh.C.2.6.5, then.  That's the only reference to A.9.

Done (it's D.2.6.5 btw)